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Make a Wish by =BlackSen:iconBlackSen:

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2 of 3 Delynn pics uploaded from my old Yiffygirl account. Needed a couple of pics of Delynn for my "Rachel and the gang" folder.
Also a pic for :iconchalosan:'s long past birthday.

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*BEAvenger May 18, 2009, 11:21:37 AM
This time I find the drawing a bit more bold with the poses, that is a really good point. Stay trying things like that I can only be a good thing. Now there is a mistake with the arm of the character on the right, or rtaher with her shoulder. the arms foreshortening is ok, bout the shouldr is missing: There should be a round on the shulder. And the angle of her body is a bit akward it lacks width. Now correct that learn from that and you will improve.
I may sound redundant but once again: contrast for the colors of the shade.
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~HinataGoddess May 18, 2009, 9:07:35 AM
I wish I was that guy right now. I love the line work and facial expressions... but I would like to point that I think, if in a dark room, one candle should create less light then what is shown. Plus there should be an amber shade on the characters from the light of the candle. It looks like you got your perspective down, what's in front is bigger then whats in back. The background light kinda makes it look like there is a door or window leading to another room, which is cool. I loved this pic when you first submitted it, and I love it now! Instant Re-Fav!...
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Mood: Suggestive ~HinataGoddess May 18, 2009, 9:34:03 AM
Thats the most perfect present that I could ever imagine...
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Mood: Love *chalosan May 20, 2009, 6:32:03 PM
I loved that pic! Thanks again for doing it. :D

Sorry for not writing a critic. :P

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Mood: Wow! ~Goldteddy May 26, 2009, 7:20:12 AM
Wow looks like his brain just shut down oO

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~Soulslayer317 Jun 2, 2009, 11:18:15 AM
If that was the lucky perv's wish then it would be commen, awsome stuff you have here

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~lucian357 Jul 25, 2009, 4:28:32 PM
guy in the middle: "i dont need to it's already come true"
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