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Adventure Girl

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Bought time I drew a pic of Roxy! :D
Roxanne and her own little Peekling enjoying a nice little adventure on a nice little sunny day.
Roxanne is, as you all may know, the smartest, nerdiest, and tallest girl of the band of busty friends, and probably just as adventure loving as Rachel. Was gonna draw them together, but i figured she needed her own pic to shine in.
Also, I thought It might be a bit funny, and slightly fitting to cameo a character from one of my favorite cartoons.
WHAT TIME IS IT?! :D
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Now I have to say this first, but please bear with me.
What is that? Is it a giraffe, or a stretched leopard, or what? This is a terrifying distortion of the human physique.

Now that's out of the way, I can actually begin. For the sake of clarity, I will assume she is a giraffe.

I like the idea. Backpacking tourist giraffe, I like it. However, I have some gripes with you you adapted that. For one thing, her neck should be much longer. It sounds strange, considering that you're trying to make her look more human, but in this case, a thinner girl with a long neck would work better. As for the face, I think you should have kept the general "horsey" face shape. That's just my taste, but all the best furry artworks keep the snout and still look good, so I'm sure you can do it.
As for her boobs, I cannot believe she hasn't toppled over. But maybe that's just my mental image of her being more vegan and fashion model than cupcakes and curvy.
Her arms seem a bit too bulky, and her left arm seems to be bending oddly.
As far as the lineart and colouring are concerned, this is fantastic! Even on her planet sized titties, you kept the shading perfect.

TL;DR use a reference next time, maybe she should be thinner, don't cut off her nose, make her neck longer, and above all
keep up the good work!